Monday, March 7, 2011

A short story from a museum excursion in Japan


The Night the Stars Dimmed
by Chris Pelletier

February 27, 2011


Tommy never tired of looking at the stars. There was a long, deep-seeded connection with them.

When he was younger, he occasionally went into the fields with his dad past his bedtime. The galaxy’s road stretched out across the black velvet, which was peppered with tons of solitary stars. The lamp which his father brought had a hood, so their eyes would get used to the dark. Tommy carried the paper mache globe with the night sky painted on it, which his father had made for him for his seventh birthday last year.

“See that group of stars there?” his father said pointing his finger. Tommy looked at the direction, but scrunched up his face. “There? Those three in a row.”

Tommy saw the pattern his father meant. “Yeah. What are they?”

“They make up Orion’s belt. He was a hunter in olden times. The old gods made him immortal in the sky. You can kind of make out his form there, there, and there.”

“Dad, what does immortal mean?”

“It means you can’t die.”

“Oh. I hope I can be put into stars in the sky some day.”

His father laughed and patted Tommy’s head. “Ya never know. Let’s get back home, or your Ma will kill us.”

So the pair walked through the dark grass back to their home. As they approached, the lights dimmed the stars. Tommy’s bedtime approached, and it was off to dreamland with a tuck in and kiss from mom and dad.

Years later, his father brought him to the observatory in the hills to get a good look at the stars. It was a Friday night, so his mom could not make a fuss about having school the next day. The cloudless California sky held the evening’s gems. The moon obliged Tommy and his father by staying away that night, too. It was as dark as any closet Tommy had ever hid in. Maybe even moreso.

They went into the building which had the funny dome on top. “Hey, Bill,” Tommy’s father said to his coworker.

“Ah, we have a visitor tonight, I see. How ya doing, Tommy?”

“Fine, thanks, Mr. Miller,” Tommy said with a smile, as he took off his cap.

“You here to see Jupiter tonight?”

“You mean I can see the biggest planet?”

“Yep. We aligned old Gertrude, here, and she’s looking straight up at the old man.”

The monster planet. Second in size only to the sun. With his naked eye, Tommy could see the yellow glow in the sky, as they walked to the observatory. Now he could see it closer with the help of the metal telescope, which looked like a sewage pipe on a frame.

His father walked over to Gertrude and closed an eye, and put his other one to the viewer. He whistled. “Sure is pretty tonight. Come on over here and have a look.”

Tommy raced to his father’s side and bounced in anticipation. “My turn, my turn.”

His father laughed and said, “OK, hold your horses. Just put your eye up to there and look. Squint if you have to. It might help you focus.”

Tommy did as he was told. There it was, about the size of a dime, glowing in the night. It looked a bit red. “Oh, dad, it’s wonderful.”

“I thought you’d like it. Next to Mars, it’s one of my favorites. I remember the first time—“
A sudden shaking of the ground beneath the building sent books falling from the shelves and furniture rumbling. “Earthquake,” said Bill, with a frightful look on his face.

Tommy’s dad grabbed Tommy’s arm as things rocked and lurched. The gas lamps rocked, spilling oil on the floor. A small pool ignited and soon the observatory’s wooden floor was aflame. Chaos errupted.

Gertrude moaned and groaned in her mounting, and she broke free of the bolts which restrained her. Tommy’s father’s attention was on the fire, so he did not notice the falling telescope.
Tommy’s eyes bulged, and he yanked his father’s arm, using all of his weight. “Come on, Dad.”
The metal tube rushed down, just missing Tommy’s father’s head by inches.

Over the noise of the fire, Bill said, “Let’s go, Frank! Get out of here!”

Tommy’s father took a moment to scan the surroundings through red eyes. All of his years of work going to flames. He took Tommy by the hand and both raced to the door, dodging the fire. The smoke hung thick and choked them. The heat became a blanket of pain. His father grabbed at the door handle, but burned his hand. Tommy took off his flannel shirt and wrapped it around his hand and opened the latch. The fresh air gave fuel to the fire within and all three leapt out of the inferno just as a crescendo of fire poured out into the night.

A column of smoke rose into the night sky, and the stars were dimmed by the orange glow of the observatory. As the closest fire brigade was miles away in San Francisco, the building would not be rescued.

Bill looked at Tommy’s father’s hand and said, “It’s not too bad. Good thing Tommy here had enough wits to cover his hand.”

Tommy looked at his father’s second degree burns and grimaced. His father looked at him. “You OK, Tommy?”

“Yeah, Dad. Too bad about Gertrude.”

“Well, there can be many Gertrudes, but only one Tommy, and I thank the stars he’s safe. Let’s get you back home to your Ma.”

A week later, Tommy and his father went out to look at the heavens once again. They brought a smaller telescope with them. “Dad, sorry that you can’t work with the big telescope anymore at the observatory.”

“Ah, it’s all right. Remember, the stars are immortals. They will always be there for us, no matter if we have a big telescope, small telescope, or no telescope at all. As long as we can look at them and appreciate them, that’s all that matters to me. We don’t need an observatory.”
“Yeah, this field is a good enough observatory,” Tommy said.

They both looked up at the immortals above, and Tommy thanked the stars for allowing him and his father to enjoy the moment together.

Saturday, March 5, 2011

Rabbits abounding

Happy very belated New Year to those who have read my Blog!

Tis been very busy with this storyweaver, but I hope ot be more prolific in the near future.

Consider it to be my new year's resolution.

Thursday, November 4, 2010

The Privateer: A review

I just finished reading The Privateer by Josephine Tey, and I enjoyed it very much.

It is a historical fiction about the rise of Sir Henry Morgan (yes, the same guy in the red coat on Captain Morgan's Spiced Rum). I found it to be well written and the story moves along at a good clip. It is not bogged down with romance, as pirate stories may prone to be. Rather, it follows his life from released indentured servant to Lietenant Governor of Jamaica.

The distancing of the author and the character came in and out of focus. Sometimes Ms. Tey was in the mind of Morgan, sometimes in the mind of Spaniards and sometimes a history professor. But it all balanced well with her choices.

At first I wondered if the Morgan portrayed in the book would have been real. He seemed to be a chivalric knight on a crusade against Spain. Perhaps he was, perhaps he wasn't. The book does make me want to research Morgan more.

The story is a heroic one, in which a man uses his wits to become a strong leader of men and accomplishes great deeds against the odds. It is stirring to read the narrative of his exploits, albeit fictional ones... but well researched.

I liked the references in the book to Exquemline and his book The History of the Buccaneers of the Americas. I own it and read it years ago, so it was a nice reflection. In the authors note at the end, she cites a book that I want to read by Brigadier-General E.A. Cruikshank: The Life of Henry Morgan. Seemingly it paints a different picture of the buccaneer turned givernor.

If you are interested in historical fiction, and particularly pirate fiction, see if you can grab this out-of-print book from the Library or Yahoo. It is worth the read.





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Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Scene: Bachelor Pad

Bachelor Pad
2010

"Great, I'll see you tomorrow then. Bye," she said. The silky voice faded to silence and then a click. It was certain. She was coming over!

I couldn't have been happier. A DVD, some wine perhaps, and who knows what then. But my place...

I looked in the living room and saw the unfinished pizza box with two crushed cans of Coke. No big deal to clean.

The bedroom was a place that warranted some attention, just in case. New sheets: check. Vacuum: check. Incense: oh, yeah.

Now the bathroom-- Good gods! When was the last time I had cleaned it? Was it three weeks ago... no, no, two months... hmmm, a year and a half?

A cleaning brush sat well-intentioned next to a spray bottle that was filled with a cleaning agent. The mold on the container made it tough to tell what color the liquid inside was...

I had my work cut out for me.

Friday, October 15, 2010

Scene:The music was too loud to...

The music was too loud to...
copyright 2010

George was trying his best to keep Mara on his shoulders as she wildly gyrated to the rhythms of U2. He imagined her smiling and laughing, swaying like a willow in the breeze as she watched Bono croon out "Where the Streets Have No Name." But one minute into the song, Mara started to get heavy. George was by no means a weakling of a guy--he worked out once a month. But gravity was pulling her down.

His knees felt like they were going to buckle. So with great relief, he put her down mid-song.

When he stood up smiling, he met the gaze of a gorgon. Her face was contorted in a way that seemed like a makeup artist from Star Trek had his way with her.

"What's wrong, honey?" George asked with trepidation.

Mara unloaded a sentence, which George could only surmise was filled with rage, into his face. But it was only white noise blending with the Edge's guitar riff.

"What?" he said again, not really wanting to hear. His imagination had already predicted that she was having a good time above the crowd and hated to be put down prematurely.

Again, the blast of unintelligible sound. He was relieved that the music was to loud to hear Mara.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Scene: It was Supposed to be a Romantic Movie...

It was Supposed to be a Romantic Movie...
copyright 2010

My guts were hurting waiting for Kara to show up. A blind date. The first date I had had since-- well, I try to put Jill out of my memory, but it's hard.

I had met Kara on Yahoo personals. We had emailed several times, gave the basics. And after the token ten bits of correspondence, she graciously granted me a look at her. Though the image was slightly pixelated, I could tell that she was attractive. Of course, in the world of cyberspace, the truth is often a casualty, so I didn't expect too much when we would met.

So I stood in front of the theater with my hands in my pockets, then out, then back again, trying to figure out the coolest way to present myself. The clamminess of my palms was getting to be unbearable and troublesome. I mean, I'm a handshake kind of guy, but what kind of impressions would I leave if I filled her hand with several ounces of liquid nervousness?

I heard some heels clicking on the pavement off to the left. I got scared. Do I look? Is it her? Would I be disappointed?

I took a chance, looked over in that direction, and what I saw was unbelievable...

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Thoughts from a student: Inner monologue scene


Thoughts of Futaba
(Age 15)
copyright 2010

I hate my mom.
She always tells me to study. I hate that. Of course, I know I have a test next week. Doesn’t she know I have friends? Doesn’t she know I like to watch TV once in awhile? Why can’t she give me any time to myself?

It’s, like, we always have this stupid talk once a week, which turns into an argument. I’m glad I threw that book at her. She deserved it after pulling my hair.

Oh, my friend sent me an email. Nope. Just some stupid spam. I hate that. Why don’t they realize that I am not going to buy their crap?

Where is my bag? Here it is. Oh, my god! This folder is the best. The Arashi boys are so cute! I love them. I’m going to marry Hiroyuki. I wish he didn’t have that stupid girlfriend. Why do idols always have such beautiful girlfriends? She is tall with long hair and light skin. She is so lucky. I’m short and will never get such a cute boy like Hiroyuki.

Oh, another message. Ah, it’s my friend. What’s new, Manami? Uh, huh. Uh huh. Yeah, same old blah, blah, blah. Just like me. I can’t wait for the school festival this weekend so I can get out of my house. It is so horrible being around my mom and my stupid sister.

Yuka’s been nagging me about this and that lately. She’s just like Mom. I can’t believe that she asked me to record that program for her the other day and I did. I asked her if she saw it, she said, “Of course, stupid.” She can be such a bitch.
What’s that? Oh, it’s you Momo. Come on in, girl. Let Mommy pick you up. Oh, you are so full of licks today. Oh, my god! Your tongue went in my mouth. That’s ok, you’re such a cutie little dog. You bring Mommy so much happiness. Why can’t anyone else in this house do the same?
You’re the only one I love, Momo.